My special effects affect the meaning an mood by turning my visuals in my visual poem into another perspective. By using certain effects like dreams and black and white can take my audience to another world. The dream effects shows a sense of imagination and happiness that my friend and I share. The back and white effect show a type of long ago and in the past visual. This effect helped me show our past in every way. Our fights, laughs, dysfunctional times and everything else. Lastly the other effects that I used was to put an original take some of my pictures and videos to be out of this world and one of a kine instead of using my pain footage.
I am pretty satisfied on how my final product came out. I know to make it better I should've used more video footage instead of pictures because my pictures didn't capture everything that I wanted it to. Also some of my video seems low quality for some reason but I blame the camera for that. Also the music I used I wish I turned it a little louder because you cant really hear it that well. Next I wish I had put some transitions into my video instead to transition smoothly from clip to clip.
I thought all aspects of it were well done.
ReplyDeleteI think you could've used more B-Roll.
I liked your poem?
I liked how your voiceover was nice and clear without any background noise. I think that you could've added some text layovers. I also liked how you didn't used the same b-roll twice.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the emotion you showed with your shots. Maybe next time get more variatiion with the shots you were getting, a lot of them were friends laughing with each other. I loved the effects, they really added to the piece.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was written well and was said clearly. You could have made your audio levels higher. Overall, I really liked your visual poem and the emotion put into the visuals.
ReplyDeleteI really like the effects that you added in your poem
ReplyDeleteYou could of used slightly more relevant B-Roll for some of your words
I liked that you put some humor into your visual poem.
The music matches extremely well with the poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that the B-Roll is a bit repetitive, so you could add some more interesting shots.
The audio was clear and easy to hear.
Your rhyme scheme was well done, and subtle enough so it wasn't overwhelming, great job! The B-Roll could be slightly improved in its relevance, and it seemed a bit repetitive. The music was well picked, good job!
ReplyDeleteThe music that you added was very nice, it added a certain kind of mood. You could have gotten a little more clips outside of school. The effects that you added to some clips were very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe voice over was great I didn't hear any background noise. One of the shots had a shaky movement. The background music matched the poem perfectly.
ReplyDeleteI really like you b-roll of Jaliyah guys because it really shows friendship. You could of spoken a little clearly though. I also really like you background music. Great Job Momi!
ReplyDeleteI liked the meaning of the poem and what the subject was.
ReplyDeleteSome of the B-role could have been shot more clearly.
Volume was a very good level and the music fit in very well.
1.) I really liked how your edited your poem and how you slowed down some clips to bring out the over-all meaning.
ReplyDelete2.) Even though your poem was great, I think you could have increased your voice a little more.
3.) Wow! You did an amazing job, your poem's meaning was great, the music went along well, and there was hardly any camera movement.
I liked how you used the effects to make your poem more interesting. I think that you could've add a few text layovers to your visual poem, but overall I thought that it was really good and had a great meaning to it.
ReplyDeleteThe music and voice over leveled out nicely.
ReplyDeleteIt was pretty short.
The music worked nicely with the theme.
I liked your poem a lot, the message and the voice over was great. It could have been longer and you could have had better B-roll. Other then that it was great.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you slowed down one of your shots, it made your poem more meaningful. Although, your voiceover is just a smidge hard to understand. I liked how all of your shots and images related to what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteI love your story and the main idea of the poem Kuumomi.
ReplyDeleteI think if you made the narraters voice just a tad louder then the music, it would of been easier to hear and understand.
I do love the different b-rolls that you used. It really helped understand the poem and I love how it related to it.
Hiya Kuumomi! Great job on your video. I really liked your B-Roll shots since it depicted a lot of emotions. It was really realistic. One thing I would do is to make your audio louder possibly because it was kinda soft. Either way, your poem was really catchy and you did a wonderful job with special effects. I liked that bubble effect on Angelicia smiling.
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Kuumomi and keep it up!
Very cute and I love your VO its really funny! Maybe next time turn up the audio just a little. I love the whole friendship concept it relates to everyone, you also have great b-roll so thats a plus and everyone seems really happy so thats great!
ReplyDeleteThe voice over was super clear. It would have been great if you took video instead of pictures for the dogs. It was up to date not all old like when you were saying selfie sunday.
ReplyDeleteI liked how the audio was easy to understand throughout your entire visual poem. There was one time where I got confused about, if you were talking about pets still. Thanks to how well your visuals matched your audio I kind of got it.
ReplyDeleteI really like how your b-roll went really well with what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time try to make your voice louder so it is easier to hear you.
But really great visual poem over all!
Hey Kuumomi. I really like how you were able to make your words rhyme and match (I can't rhyme). One thing that you could improve is to make your music a little softer, it was kind of distracting. Another thing I liked about your poem is how you added how sometimes friends get into mischief because it's so true.
ReplyDeleteCompliment:I really really love this Visual Poem because your effects being put into this visual poem, also your voice over volume is perfect, everything that you've edited matches very well with this Visual Poem
ReplyDeleteImprovements: Maybe could've improved on your camera movements and try to reduce the amount of movement
Compliment: Great everything! Great story, Voice Overs A & B Roll.
Nice job Kuumomi! The effects that you put on the B-Roll was awesome!
ReplyDeleteThe B-Roll could have been slightly more relevant.
The music gave a nice touch to your poem.